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Martha school: chapter 11

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I gave the revisions a quick once over, and it seems more understandable this time.

However:

QuoteMr. Smith had been scribbling on the blackboard. Explaining that a fire has a triangle effect. And that a certain salt can turn blue from a flame. He had been drawing figures and pictures of how fires can be useful.

I'm interested in this triangle effect? 

Also, I'd like to see the drawings of fires being useful please!
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